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Friday, May 16, 2014
Buddy time
We are buddies with Basecamp. Today we drew pictures of books we love.






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Wednesday, May 14, 2014
RECOUNTS... What do they need to include?
Last week we wrote recounts to share our holiday
adventures. You have probably received our ‘first drafts’. This
means that apart from spelling (some), they have not been added to or improved yet.
It would be great if you could
work with your child to help them work towards meeting the criteria below. We
look at this criteria at school and discussions at home will help reinforce
their learning and understanding
Below is a checklist for what a recount should
include.
Structure
Met
The title
grabs the reader’s attention (it usually summarises the text).
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There are
specific participants (mum, the crab).
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A setting
or orientation gives background information answering who? when? where? why?
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Events are
identified and described in chronological order.
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The
details of time, place and incident are clearly stated. (At 11.15 pm, between
Reid Rd and Havelock St a man drove at 140 kms toward the shopping centre).
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Personal
thoughts/reactions are included.
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Paragraphing
is used.
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Concluding
comments may express a personal opinion regarding the events described
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The ending
may describe the outcome of the activity (in e.g. a science activity).
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Language
Recounts are written in the past tense (she yelled, it nipped, she
walked).
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Words which link events in time (next, later, when, then, after,
before, first, at the same time, as soon as she left, late on Friday) are
used.
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Events are described using:
* verbs (action words),
* adverbs (which describe or
add more detail to verbs).
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Details are chosen to add interest or humour.
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Personal pronouns (I, we) are
used.
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Figurative language (alliteration, onomatopoeia, simile, metaphor,
personification) may be used.
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Sentences create tension/excitement.
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Descriptive details provide information (He was a skinny boy with a
blue shirt, red sneakers and long tied back hair).
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Week 2 Updates
The first week has whizzed by and we already only have 8 weeks until the next holidays!
As you know Cross Country was postponed. I have included the updated programme details below. We will now be running AT SCHOOL.
Book week is next week, with the Book Parade on TUESDAY.
We are continuing to prepare for Book Week in week 3. The Book Character Parade is on the TUESDAY of that week so get thinking about who you want to be & where your character is from. You have to be able to tell the judges about the book & the character.
Thank you for your boxes.
We are trying to get some of our writing published on the Ipads at the moment. Keep an eye out for it here & on our Room 7 page on the school website.
Term
2 – no sunhats required… wooly hats are optional!
I
have ordered the SMART tables charts, hopefully they won’t take long to arrive.- They were being couriered today!
Have a great week
Louise & Rm 7
FYI...
Hello Parents and Whanau,
Due to the weather forecast (rain) and the state of the grounds at the Old School Reserve (soggy) we have decided to postpone the school cross country race until Friday 16 May (this Friday).
The revised programme is as follows:
9:30am - 10:30am
BC, TTO, Magma will complete a school-based course
11am - 12:30pm
TRS and T@TT will complete the cross country at the Reserve regardless of weather (famous last words!) - hopefully this will allow some time for the dew to dissipate.
TRS AND T@TT STUDENTS WILL NEED TO HAVE ROBUST RUNNING SHOES AND BE PREPARED FOR MUDDY CONDITIONS!
We will take tarps etc for the kids to sit on while they watch the other children race.
As a parent cheerleader, you may wish to bring your gumboots and a deck chair to keep you off the marsh lands.
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